(In college I took a creative writing class which resulted in a couple of short stories I wrote. I still have them so I'm going to publish them here every once in a while.)
Charlie Bowerman hated his
life. He wanted to become a fireman but instead became a financial
adviser for the Transamerica Corporation working in the famous
Transamerica Pyramid. He was pressured by his overbearing mother to
join the business world. His father encouraged Charlie to chase his
dream of becoming a fireman but in the end Charlie eventually went to
the Cal-Berkeley business school and would later go to work for
Transamerica.
And this is where Charlie
hates himself. He was pressured into a job he did not want, into a
field he feels like he doesn't belong to, by a mother he now
despises. Charlie will admit though that there is one bonus working
as a financial adviser, what his salary can afford.
As a child Charlie loved the
San Francisco Giants. His father took him to his first game when he
was three and every year until Charlie was 18 his father would take
him to at least one game a year. Their bond over the Giants,
baseball, and the feeling they both received from being at the game
was euphoric and something they would always have in common.
When Charlie became
successful enough and received a very handsome salary, he decided to
buy season tickets to the Giants games at AT&T Park. He bought
two season tickets, one for himself and another for either his dad or
a friend.
Charlie felt alive at the
beautiful AT&T Park in the China Basin area. The sea breeze
cooled his face, the beautiful view of the San Francisco bay, the Bay
Bridge, and the Yerba Buena Island was always breathtaking no matter
how many times Charlie has seen that view. Mostly though Charlie just
enjoyed being at the game. He loved the nameless fans who sat around
him. He loved the way he felt, free. He loved that it brought back
those fond memories of his dad teaching him about this beautiful game
of baseball.
“Maybe a financial adviser
isn't so bad,” Charlie would think whenever he was at the ballpark.
One game Charlie always thinks about is the day he met Lucy Envall.
A couple of years ago Charlie decided
to skip out on work early and attend a day game at AT&T Park with
the Giants playing their hated rival the Los Angeles Dodgers. Charlie
loved the atmosphere at the ballpark whenever the Giants played the
Dodgers. Giants fans wanted trolley Dodger blood whenever the blue
scum would scamper north of Santa Barbara.
On this day the Giants were fighting
for a playoff spot in late August. The crowd was in a frenzy two
hours before the game even begun. “BEAT LA” was screamed by
everyone in the crowd, even people who were buying garlic fries. “I'm
free,” a smiling Charlie thought walking to his seats.
Now when Charlie attends games he
notices three distinct kind of fans who attend games. 1. The hardcore
fan who took heckling to far and made everyone around him
uncomfortable. 2. The casual fan who only attended games to be seen.
3. The hardcore fan who knew they were only watching a game and that
at the end of the day the game itself had no affect over his life
except for the great feeling of just attending a game. Charlie
thought of himself as a hardcore fan who didn't take the game very
seriously. At least that was Charlies outward persona. Inwardly
Charlie lived and died with the Giants. He would brew about his life
and job whenever the Giants would lose.
Charlie noticed a father and son seated
in front him. “I miss day,” he thought. There was the two vulgar
drunks that sat behind Charlie. And then there was a woman who sat to
the left of Charlie. Charlie couldn't believe how beautiful her olive
skin, green eyes, and brunette hair looked. She was wearing a Giants
T-shirt and jeans. She brought a glove with her which made Charlie
smile because everyone around him were truly baseball fans.
“Should I introduce myself?,” he
thought to himself. Charlie struggled with this thought until after
the second inning and the Giants had taken an early lead. He knew by
then she should be comfortable in her surrounding.
“Hello,” he said. “My name is
Charlie.”
“Why hello,” she said smiling. “My
name is Lucy. Do you come to games often?”
Charlie was embarrassed to say he owned
season tickets and had been to almost 50 games that season. What
would she think of him? Would he be some kind of loser who spend ever
waking moment at the ballpark? “Yeah my father and I own season
tickets.” He thought that was a good answer. Let her know that you
that yes you do come often, but don't let her know exactly how many
games you come to.
“Oh that is great,” she said with a
wide smile. He didn't know if it was a good sign that her body was
turned to him or not. “I wish I could come as often as possible to
games with my father,” she said.
“Your dad teach you about the game?,”
Charlie asked while trying to make himself look interested (which he
really was) in her past.
“Yes he did,” she said. “I grew
up in Salinas and my mom died when I was young. My father was a young
dad and I'm sure he wasn't sure how to handle a young girl. So when I
was kid my father took me to a Giants game at Candlestick Park. I
immediately fell in love with baseball. The uniforms, the grass, the
fans that sit around you. It's incredibly liberating that I can sit
here and be partially unknown while have so much in common with other
people.”
Charlies ears perked up like a game dog
pointing at a bird. This woman actually knew how he felt. The
enthralling feeling of being at a ballpark. Charlie wasn't sure what
is was like to climb Everest or parachute but he always figured it
couldn't have been more exciting than going to the ballpark and
cheering on your favorite team.
“My father also took me to
Candlestick and a Giants game and I fell in love as well,” he said
smiling. “That's why I bought these season tickets for my father
and I can come to games as much as possible. He couldn't come today
because it's the middle of the week and a day game and I couldn't
find someone else to come to the game with. So I came by myself. Kind
of pathetic right?”
He gave up too much information there
he thought. She must really think he is pathetic. I mean really he
couldn't find someone else to go to the game with? Does he have
friends?
“Not pathetic at all,” she said. “I
bought this ticket last night on Stubhub and didn't invite anyone
else. Sometimes we need to be alone with our thoughts and where else
is a good place to be by yourself than at the game? Well technically
you're not by yourself,” she said laughing.
All what Charlie could do was just
smile back at her. Charlie had never had the best of luck with women.
His high school sweetheart joined the Air Force and moved to Germany.
He wasn't interested in a long distance relationship. Charlie also
had a college sweetheart who came out of the closet two years into
their relationship. That was just the way it went for Charlie. That's
why he tried to not think of a possible relationship with this woman.
“Why break your own heart this early?,” he thought. Also he
didn't know the name of this woman yet.
“By the way,” Charlie said with a
curious look. “I haven't gotten your name yet?”
“It's Lucy Envall” she said.
Lucy and Charlie would continue
chatting about their respective boring lives and cheer on the Giants.
They were both equally disappointed when the Dodgers tied the game at
4 in the sixth inning. Charlie told Lucy that he lived in the city
and worked at the Transamerica Pyramid as a financial adviser. Lucy
told Charlie that she lived in Santa Clara and worked at the Stanford
Children's Hospital as a night nurse.
Charlie enjoyed Lucy's company and he
had hoped Lucy enjoyed his. Mostly Charlie enjoyed the fact that this
woman enjoyed baseball as much as he did. He knew women passionately
loved sports, baseball, and even the Giants but he never could find
one. Charlie was trying to find a way that wasn't too awkward to ask
Lucy if she was seeing anyone. “Just my luck she's also a lesbian,”
he thought sarcastically. Luckily for Charlie that awkward moment
never came and she wasn't attracted to her same sex.
“Are you seeing anyone?,” she asked
curiously.
Now Charlie had answered questions his
whole life but he's never had to answer a question that knocked him
square in the stomach before. She was so aggressive and passionate.
If Charlie wasn't careful he might propose to her right on the spot.
“I am not,” Charlie said stumbling
over his own words. “What about you?,” he asked. He began to
inwardly panic to himself. Was this really appropriate to ask her he
thought?
“I haven't had any luck in the
relationship department,” she said.
Lucy once again had more something more
in common with Charlie. Lucy also had a high school and college
sweethearts and they all ended in disaster. The high school boyfriend
told her they could still be “friends” which always meant that
the other person was seeing someone else. Lucy found out that her
college boyfriend was actually cheating on her with another girl at a
different school and found out about the tryst when she found the
other girl's panties on his night stand. The breakup with the college
boyfriend was particularly distressful to Lucy. She just didn't trust
men after that point.
Lucy's mistrust of men further deepened
when Lucy's father passed away from stomach cancer right before he
graduation. With Lucy's mother passing away early in her life, she
had a special bond with her father. He was her guardian, best friend,
mother, and father. His passing devastated Lucy and placed her in a
deep hole that she wasn't sure she would ever get out of.
If it wasn't for the lead doctor at the
Children's hospital working as a mentor and father figure, Lucy may
have never trusted men again. The lead doctor looked after Lucy, was
her guide when she was training and looked after her at the hospital.
Lucy gradually climbed out of her hole but she still hadn't even
dated a man since her cruel breakup with her college boyfriend.
There was something though about
Charlie that intrigued Lucy. Was it there shared passion for
baseball? Was she looking for another father figure in her life? Or
was it his innocent looking blue eyes? Oh those eyes. Charlie had
eyes like a basset hound. Sweet and innocent. She could look into
those eyes and see a man who wouldn't hurt or betray her.
The Giants were down by two runs in the
bottom of the eighth inning when they began their comeback. Super
rookie Buster Posey and Juan Uribe each reached base with one out.
Pat Burrell, the slugger the Giants had picked up off the scrap heap
just a couple of months prior, stepped to the plate. Burrell known as
a passive hitter took the first two pitches. One ball and one strike.
On the next pitch Burrell sent the ball to the right field bleachers
to give the Giants a 7-6 lead.
The crowd erupted in euphoria. The
father and son hugged each other. The two drunks spilled their beers
while high fiving. In the moment of euphoria Charlie and Lucy hugged
each other. It was a spur of the moment reaction but it felt right to
both of them. They had been through so much in their lives. Failed
relationships, deaths, and parental prodding. At that moment they
needed each other.
“I'm so sorry,” Charlie said with a
concerned looked. “I didn't mean to do that.”
“No problem at all,” she said
smiling. “I kind of jumped into your arms.”
Oh how did those arms feel, thought
Lucy. The warmth that came from Charlie was beyond comforting. On the
flip side Charlie could feel by that hug that Lucy had the same
lonesomeness that Charlie felt. Years of sadness turned into 5
seconds of joy for the both of them.
After the game, a Giants victory, the
both of them decided to take a walk down the Embarcandero. Charlie
wasn't sure if this was a date or not? It felt kinda like a date. It
had been so long for the both of them to be in the comfort of someone
different.
They both talked about their lives.
Lucy's father's death. Charlies prodding mother and the job he
despised. They mostly talked though about baseball. About the
ballpark. About the surprising run the Giants were making. About
Buster Posey and his chances at becoming the National League Rookie
of the Year.
Before they realized they had walked
all the way to Pier 39. They decided to walk out to where the seals
laid in the sun and talked some more about life and baseball. They
both had a feeling that something special had just happened and that
something special was going to continue.
Two years later Charlie and Lucy were
now Mr. and Mrs. Bowerman. They did decided to see each other more
and their meeting place became the ballpark. Charlie felt guilty
about giving Lucy the other season ticket over his father, but
Charlie had explained the situation and received a full blessing from
his father.
Despite only knowing each other for a
couple of months Charlie had decided to propose to Lucy. He proposed
to Lucy at the ballpark during the World Series but not on the
stadium cam because they both decided that was too tacky.
The Giants would go on to win the World
Series that season. Charlie and Lucy decided to buy three season
tickets for themselves and Charlies father. Charlie decided to quit
his job with Transamerica and fulfill his dream of becoming a
firefighter. Lucy's salary at the hospital was more than enough to
cover for the season tickets.
If it wasn't for that day at the
ballpark though Charlie and Lucy would have never met and fell in
love. If it wasn't for that day at the ballpark Charlie might still
be miserable working as an adviser. And if it wasn't for that one day
Lucy might not have ever trusted another man again. Dreams do come
true at the ballpark.
I like the part about the Giants winning the world series.
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